This is my slideshow on marine pollution. It is about the affects of marine pollution.
I have changed it after I got the feedback from my peers. The results showed that I had to work on giving suggestions on how to help.
I have changed it after I got the feedback from my peers. The results showed that I had to work on giving suggestions on how to help.
Monday, March 18, 2019
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Hi Lewis. that's a really interesting slide you have made.I like all of the cool photos you have added into your slide. i also like how you have added ways we can help to stop ocean pollution. i hope people listen to your ways to stop pollution because i will. Next i would like to see more slides with other ideas.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment Callum. I will add more slides with more ways to help the marine area
ReplyDeleteLewis, as always, good technical skills! Your information is clearly organised and headers on each slide help the reader. The visual work well to provide information and I like the way you have edited after feedback from your peers. The ways to help on each page (with links!) are useful and practical. One thing you might consider next time is to step up the emotive, descriptive and persuasive language to help really hammer home your thoughts.
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